Back with another story.
Here’s the story from the page –
Hannah and I were oh so happy to find the game full up with BA-NA-NA Kevin and Bob. We fed that machine and Han grabbed Minion after Minion only for everyone to fall back down when the claw got to the top. We were simply robbed! So I bought her one for Christmas instead!
The takeaways from this page/would I add anything more?
Simple answer – yes! I was running out of room even though I’d used the typewriter for my journaling rather than writing it out to fit more words on the page. The story is there more or less but I could have embellished a little more as it is short and to the point. Like I say it gets the idea across and it is a reminder of another fun day spent with her at the seaside.
52 stories is a series (or adventure) in my story telling. Can I get the whole story onto a layout? Am I telling the stories I want to tell? Read the inspiration post here.